make me weak

those kisses make me weak...
like the time
  
I took those muscle relaxers in second period
and when I feel you touch me...
I melt...

like crayons
in a back seat
on
a hot
day

Reviews

[Bubo]

Great use of metaphors, the crayons on the back seat was a great visual!
Being kissed makes us feel so many emotions, but I like the fun in this, and the warmth in writing it.