Spiders Eye

The spiders Eye

 The Spiders Eye.I open the skriting under my trailer.  All i see is cobwebs I look to the left then the right, And all i see is a black cat .The black cat had something white around his left eye. I take another look and i say  "Randy I found a kitty I think it has someting on it's left eye!" I picked it up so Randy said "It's a boy!  Maybe we should name him spider!" I thougnt that was the best idea. The Spiders Eye!    

Author's Note

This happened on 10-29-09 around 4:00 pm It was some thing to write about!
let me know what you think!
I'll put more some pic's up and also i will put some actual writing.

Reviews

[Nate E. Flake (Cösmic ..]

wow dont mean to sound really stupid, but the story took on a good turn, from what the reader would imagine from its title

[SilentDreamer]

Very short and simple. It is cute. :) Great job,it's an interesting story. Spider's Eye is an interesting name. Keep writing. :D

[Sharkapillar]

aww kittys!
nice flow and diction, great write Missybug!