Liar

Liar

A Poem by Davidgeo
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You'll Never Have To Say Goodbye Too Soon

© 2019 Davidgeo


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depends on how soon is soon and how far is too soon...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

The key word is "never". Note that I did not use "always".
goldenscar__

5 Years Ago

language is tricky...
Indeed. But many do it too late.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Of course, but I didn't say "you'll always have to...", I said "you'll never have to...". At some po.. read more
this got me thinking about all the people i've said goodbye to. such a short and simple line, yet powerful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Do you have to leave so soon > Stay a bit longer

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saying it as it is in its stark reality. Cold it may be, but truthful it is.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a biting line
cutting through smoke and mirrors
touching truth
cold as it may be
but true
great line

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 12, 2019
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Davidgeo
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