Self Gardening

Self Gardening

A Poem by Davidgeo
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what's not an excuse for day drinking
s**t talking
overt trouble making
general dumb assery
unformed stupidity
abandonment
tom foolery
f**k tardedness
a*s clown faced buffoonery 
unreasonable reason's
for self serving disposition's ,

confronting weakness requires failure

finding excuses to stop making excuses
behind the disaster's
finding the root causes 

beneath the skin

to form product
truly
out of pain
necessarily
 
i try to say,

to forever dissever
the ego from it's wall's
to make a garden
of your greatest beauty
obviously

... requires something ugly
undeniable
unavoidable
very pure
unsavory
honest and unassailably . . .

not very spectacular 
on the regular
 on the regular
each and every day

    to become clean 
    you must first see what's f*****g filthy

© 2020 Davidgeo


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I like this poem. It's frank and unapologetic but has a very good message about self-care and self-improvement. I would agree with everything that it expressed here.

Is that Michael Jordan? He was a pretty incredible athlete. I like people who hold themselves and others accountable for their shortcomings. Brutal honesty is important to bring out people's best.

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I like this poem. It's frank and unapologetic but has a very good message about self-care and self-improvement. I would agree with everything that it expressed here.

Is that Michael Jordan? He was a pretty incredible athlete. I like people who hold themselves and others accountable for their shortcomings. Brutal honesty is important to bring out people's best.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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