Protection

A Poem by little.red.train

Like a tree in the autumn you stripped me bare.
You removed my protection and left me there
Alone and naked on the bathroom floor,
listening to the slamming door

© 2009 little.red.train

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Very strong and deep emotions conveyed in so little words. I really liked it! It tells so much but then leaves alot to the imagination. Great job!

"Keep writing...Giving life with every key stroke"

-Dawn Marie

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on August 13, 2009

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little.red.train

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