the beginning the middle and the sad end

I'm on the edge of my seat, i'm so excited

but really? is this a safe place to be? 

teeter and totter in equal amount

if not you'll be out for the count

prefect proportions are impossible when only one is kicking

the other is there yet unwilling, oh how fitting

this complicated machine requires mantinace to run

and if you fuel it with what it need it will be quite fun

neglect and mistreatment leave dings and scratches

and when the machines run outta steam, it finaly detaches

Author's Note

first thoughts? critique it praise it give an opinion
say what you wanna