Poems? Are you serious??!!

Poems? Are you serious??!!

A Poem by allonsy_doctor

Poems? Are you serious??!!

 

Poems? Are you serious??!!

I think I must be delerious

When did I make this change?

When did my thoughts rearrenge

To think I could write a poem

I will instantly tow 'em

From my mind

So that I could find

Who put it in there in the first place

in that dark and onimous space?

Oh wait, this isn't that bad

Now, why the heck was I so mad...

 

Look!!! I wrote a poem!!! Awesome!!!! [Smiles with glee]

© 2009 allonsy_doctor


Author's Note

allonsy_doctor
Heheheheh I don't often rhyme, but it was exceptional...

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This is so cute! I love the little internal argument with yourself, yelling about how you don't want to/can't write a poem while you are in the process of writing a great one. Nice work! I think you should write some more poetry. :D

-Howl

Posted 15 Years Ago


Exeptional or not, it still sounds well! ;) You should write poetry too, you have to know!

Posted 15 Years Ago


a spell check and re edit would improve your presentation however I enjoyed your little whimsy

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 28, 2009

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