Wishing

Who determines which wishes come true? Or even if wishes come true at all? There are so many sayings about them- when one door closes, another one opens. Wish upon a star. Never give up. Life isn't fair. But what's the truth? How much does hard work factor into getting what you want? How much of it is just pure wishing? Is there really destiny? Are there certain things in life that are just set in stone, permanent, unchangeable, inevitable? How do you know which things those are? I wish getting what you wish for was as simple as throwing a coin into the Trevi Fountain, wishing upon a star- upon an airplane, for those of us who don't have stars to look up at at night. Everyone needs a miracle every once in a while. We're only human, and there's only so much we can do to make things better for ourselves. Sometimes we just need a little help.

Reviews

[My Fair Lady]

I love this idea. My suggestion is that you work on the format. For me, it is like a run on sentence, but you can give the reader time to ponder each sentence, each idea if you break it up into lines. Perhaps ;) Keep writing and good job.