Up.

Way overdue. I was supposed to post this at midnight. It is now 1:49. Enjoy.

Verse:

She's scared of the world,
She stands strong against the wind.
Feelin' the rain falling down on her head,

She's starting to give in,

To all the crazy things, around.

They just push her to the ground.

Chorus:

And she tries, and she tries

to get back up again.

And she falls and she falls

right back down again.

No one can help her, only you.

Her world is crashing down.

So be a friend,

and pick her up off of the ground.

Verse:

Fighting to stand up,

her feet start to slip.

Once a strong girl,

she never expected this.

Chorus:

And she tries, and she tries

to get back up again.

And she falls and she falls

right back down again.

No one can help her, only you.

Her world is crashing down.

So be a friend,

and pick her up off of the ground.

Bridge:

One day her prince,

will sweep straight down.

And pick her back up,

in his arms.

And carry her home.

Chorus 2:

And her tries, and her tries,

helped her get back up again.

And her falls, and her falls,

helped her get back up again.

The one that could help her, was only you.

Her world isn't crashing down anymore.

You, her prince...

You picked her up off of the ground, 

Author's Note

So so so so rough. =/ Let me know what you thinkkk<3

Reviews

[Cliff Rhodes]

I like it as a poem but not as a song because somehow the repeated chorus makes it a little rough. Nice thoughts.

[Schnookums]

Its cute, maybe a little work. However it made me smile and think maybe you've got a secret CCTV camera following me haha. anyway i like it just look into the second verse, i think it needs like another couplet or something.??

[Marlena]

It's cute ^_^ but I think it needs a little work, maybe a third verse or something, and the second one kind of sounds like it should be a little longer. I liked it though, so good work so far :)

[unspokenguilt]

umm, perhaps you can name it her prince of savior *shrugs* or something like that I don't know, but it is a great piece of work you've got going on there...great job!

[lindsay]

I like the chorus a lot. It's really sweet.