A flower that bloomed too soon

A flower that bloomed too soon

A Poem by aliyah
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a poem of going too fast--

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I swallowed shards of glass

As Painful as my past 

My blood draws cold,                       

I’ve never felt this old.

See, i’m only 15 

So why do i feel 

Like i’ve lived in a field 

Of no return

© 2021 aliyah


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aliyah
cherish your childhood<3

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This little poem in its brevity, left its mark on me. For a fifteen year old to feel such pain in childhood is incredibly sad. Youth should be about blooming not about suffering and yet that is the reality for many children in life today. Precious is childhood, but not for some.

Chris

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This little poem in its brevity, left its mark on me. For a fifteen year old to feel such pain in childhood is incredibly sad. Youth should be about blooming not about suffering and yet that is the reality for many children in life today. Precious is childhood, but not for some.

Chris

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's a really nice poem. By the way do you write what you actually go through?

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aliyah

3 Weeks Ago

sometimes yes my poems are about my feelings, thanks for asking!❤
frey

3 Weeks Ago

I know how it feels . Nice to meet you tho
aliyah

2 Weeks Ago

nice to meet you too

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Added on May 31, 2021
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Tags: #growinguptoofast #growingup #pa

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aliyah
aliyah

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I'm a 13 year old author/ poetry writer all of my work are original! I write different poetry in the category of sadness, fantasy, horror, mystery etc. more..

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