Fire 'Neath Blue Eyes

 Somewhere not far away

Lives a little girl with bright blue eyes

Who calls out for help

But no one ever hears her crys

 

She’s broken inside

Her blood runs cold

Her pulse barely exists

Her story remains untold

 

She is white as a ghost

Her ebony hair is long and frayed 

Her black dress is ripped and tattered

She wanders the streets alone and afraid

 

No one really notices her

She is invisible to the passersby

Who don’t see the fire

‘neath those chrystal blue eyes

 

They can’t see she’s hurting 

Or they just don’t care

About this poor little girl

Its so unfair

 

Sometimes she hurts to badly

That she just lets out a shriek

Not caring who’s watching

Thinking she’s some kind of freak

 

She just lets out the pain

Screaming til her throat is scratched and dry

And when she can’t scream anymore

The tears start and she silently cries

 

Some say she’s insane

But thats because they don’t understand

All this girl has been through

They haven’t seen it first hand

 

They haven’t witnessed the pain

They haven’t seen what she’s seen

Memories of her past

Are so horrifiying, so obscene

 

 

This once happy, innocent little girl

Is now scared for good

She thinks maybe she’ll die

She would if she could

 

 

Reviews

[Wildecat]

This is an awesome write, a pleasure to read your poetry.

[Caitlin.]

Awe-some!!! Really great! Wow! You are so talented! Keep up the good work!!!

[R.W. Blue]

holy smokes!! this is incredible! it's just so......indescribable. you wove the emotion is so well and described the girl, i swear i can see her now! great job!