Solemn

give me good

and red

and pink

I will bleed it and rip it

shredding it like papershredders

razors on their wrists

and I will sit in shame

shameful that I had done so

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Very dark and evocative writing, which I really enjoyed in its presentation. You paint the image of angst very well in this poem. Continued success in your writing journey.