Depression
A Poem by I speak better when i write
She smiles and is always fine, She's strong enough to hide all the mess with a simple smile A mask to fool you, To push you away She is very defensive but deep down she really needs you Even though she's always fine
She needs someone Willing to climb her high walls Walls thick and dark with no cracks or marks. She needs someone who can Break the chains that bind her soul As numb as she is She's Hoping for a breakthrough ..... Hoping for happiness Freedom from all burdens and sadness Crying for your help Even though she's always fine But her pillow never dry up
She doesn't need much from you She doesn't wanna be a burden... she says. But she needs you Conflicted and insecure as she is
Clingy is the least thing she'd like to be described as That's why she's always fine
I understand her... Because "i too"... i am fine.. Thank You for asking | | |
© 2019 I speak better when i write
Author's Note
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First time here and in writing also, Ignore grammar and punctuation.
I haven't shared this creation with anyone but few friends. Now I would like to hear from someone willing to help me out or give tips based on my skills and writing aswell. I would like to find more passion for writing also.
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This poem is beautiful. Such powerful and raw emotion. You should be very proud of this piece. Hope you find what your looking for on this site.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Thank You. It means a lot to hear such positive words. I will keep on writing as I have seen some fe.. read moreThank You. It means a lot to hear such positive words. I will keep on writing as I have seen some few inspirations on this site already,(including your work too).
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4 Years Ago
Glad I could Inspire you. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Added on November 12, 2019
Last Updated on November 12, 2019
Tags: Depression
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