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A Poem by Lauren Burch

What happens when i fall in love.



You are my ten greatest aspirations
You are my nine heart-felt wishes
You are my eight love songs
You are my seven pieces of heaven
You are my six forces joined
You are my five golden rings
You are my four biggest hugs
You are my three secret thoughts
You are my two halves
You are my one and only.

© 2008 Lauren Burch

Author's Note

Lauren Burch
I know it's a bit cheesy, but enjoy. :)

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You're right � it is kind of cheesy. But is that necessarily a bad thing? I think not. Nice poem. I enjoyed it.

Posted 16 Years Ago

interesting concept, but way too sweet. way, way too sweet. not my taste. it's well-written, though.

Posted 16 Years Ago

I think it is delightfully sweet. Thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago

I like it....

Posted 16 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was great. It has a deep message, and i like that. nice job. =)

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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5 Reviews
Added on March 24, 2008


Lauren Burch
Lauren Burch

Aubrey, TX

writing is a passion. must i say more? I LOVE: photography (each original photograph with each of my writings are my own.) modeling ( i love being a sculpture, even if I don't look like one. I am G.. more..

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