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To a Girl

To a Girl

A Poem by Brian
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About a girl I like

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She was the (o
ne) who meant
Everything (two) me and made my
Heart skip its first beat but
Alas, I would never speak

Memories and obituaries come in (three)
Is that why we could never be...
Together?
Regretful longing (four) a love to last but
Always returning to where we left

© 2014 Brian


Author's Note

Brian
The one two three and four are refereces to the heart skipping a beat line since the one is splitting lines. Also, the girl's name is Sneha Mitra so its a free form acrostic.

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Ah, a clever structure. I loved the numbers within the poem and I would have missed the Acrostic ( which explains the one) so thank you for pointing that out. It's a good poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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