Waves

Waves

A Poem by raven glassbone
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An experimental poem based off of personal feelings.

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Stagnant
Here
Inside this
Dilapidated prison cell
Made of things I own
I know I hold the only working key
But I can�t use it
Not right now
I know
I
Am
Too sick
To carry on
But if I don�t heal
Soon enough to fix this mess I know
I will only get worse
Can�t get worse
No longer
Will
I
Accept this
Inability to cry
I prevent myself from this
Because I�ve been told I am a weakling
I know I am strong
Just can�t see
How strong
I
Am

© 2008 raven glassbone


Author's Note

raven glassbone
The structure of this poem is based off of the Fabbrinacci Sequence. It's a mathematical structure in which the next number in the sequence is the sum of the two previous numbers.

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This is a great poem. I love how you used the sequence to make your poem look and sound like waves. Very well done :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this. but i have to say the number thing went over my head. but a good piece. thank you.
Moon Fixer

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow. i loved it!!! especially since you used fabbrinacci's number sequence. what a revolutionary idea! and the poem, it was magnificent! oh wow. i very much enjoyed it. good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 25, 2008
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