fell for you

I fell for you and it hurts

my cup so empty as my heart

my skin so cold as my eyes

I'm hurt

I'm sad

I'm still waiting for you

you won't come back

I'm a fool

but I fell so hard 

only for

 you 

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[Joe W]

This poem has that hint of sadness but also truth in it. Often we end up falling for people and then when they leave, we wonder why. We have to understand that things like this in life will happen and the more we accept that, the easier it is to deal with when it comes. That of course does not discredit the fact that each time this happens, it still hurts. It will always be there but you can choose how to deal with it. Short poem, strong message. That's what I love about your writing Lola.