coffee and clarity...

morning thoughts of a bad day...

3 sugars

20 ounces

black

muddy water

               hitting the back

      of my throat

warmth

    like the womb

invading every cell

                             my mind awakes

     the cobwebs clear

some jazz tune

                  stored for a rainy day

          begins playing...

my feet begin the rhythm

                         and

                         each

                        step

becomes

         a

           little

                 easier.....

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

"warmth

like the womb

invading every cell

my mind awakes

the cobwebs clear

some jazz tune

stored for a rainy day"

These lines are perfect here!
All the rest of the day can be put on hold when moments like this happen, or so we wish they could lol
Great poem!
xx

[.]

Oh gosh Bradley..this is me all over..title - terrific..couldn't have put it better - your descriptions are earthy and warm..just like that coffee

[Brad]

thanks, all, now i'm two fisting it today with my caffiene...wooo....now i know how squirrels feel

[Emily B]

I'm down to two cups a day, but only on the days I work . . . it does make the morning better

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

mmm~ the magik potion~ your descriptive flair of the whoosh factor of java is a delight~ my friend~ =)~

[Ed Hart]

i count on it...it would be nice to share a cup with you