the beats of my heart...

the beats of my heart...

A Poem by Brad
"

for my daughters...who aren't afraid to fly

"

Little me

Little you

We would sail

The ocean blue

Ride the winds

Upon a kite

Wander lands

Where dragons fight

Hand in hand

Face to face

We’ll explore

The outer space

Drift about

the starry sea

imaginations

of you and me

dearest daughters

dearest loves

who taught this father

to rise above…

 

© 2010 Brad


Author's Note

Brad
for una leigh and kathryn "skoots" coral...for putting up with a step father with an over active imagination...

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Just remember the lesson bro

Damn fine work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a different style for you - I like it very much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful and fitting poem for your daughters...........I bet they love your wonderful imagination!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderful way to express your love for them.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, wow :) This is stunning! They give such light and hope!
Beautiful poem love!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

... gosh this makes me want to run to my father and renew our relationship lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


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wow...simply put a smile on my face..that's what being a daddy is all about :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No, not putting up with... EMBRACING that imaginative brain... for it is what inspires them to fly. Beautiful dedication to the two most important females in your life.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Good stuff man!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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