My Delicious Treat

My Delicious Treat

A Poem by Mariah Mcintyre
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It's about my favorite treat in the world :) chocolate.

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The scent of your sensually luscious self, on a hot summer day, would make anyone go soft.

You melt into a gooey love song ready to casually devour.

Your dark, graceful color generates a warmth like no other,

Whether your bitter or sweet,

Like a loyal friend we meet,

Comforting me when I'm sad, or sick of love,

Like a perfect sunset in heaven after a gray, colorless day,

You bring happiness to my heart with just one loving bite.

But there is nothing else much like you,

Nothing could possibly be compared to your irreplaceable taste.

Though your easily paired to produce a completely new and unique case.

Your spirit is sophisticated, yet simple

And you'll always be there,

Like my ground to walk upon, my necessary air.

Yet pocket sized, my brown bunny,

I can carry you with me wherever,

Your hop lifts me up to leave me light as a feather.

So take me away to a creamy cloud

Forever I'll listen to your nothingness sound.

© 2009 Mariah Mcintyre


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Haha I don't like chocolate but I like this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely Delicious! I am left hungry for more! A well written treat! Keep up the good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mariah Mcintyre
Mariah Mcintyre

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I started writing here at the age of 16 and now years later, at 26, I'm back to rediscover my creative outlet. Thanks for reading and rating :) more..

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