goodluck, Dandelion

goodluck, Dandelion

A Poem by lostnstars

Don't look at their way Dandelion, 
You know you'll flicker away 
Again  
Stop gazing at them Dandelion, 
You know you'll f*****g tease a smile 
And walk away 
Again

Stop touching those, Dandelion 
You know you'll get somebody hurt 
Again 
Keep a steady mind and heart It's that easy 
Dandelion 
Just don't wander off 
When you think you're alone
Dandelion 

You learned to make friends 
With an odd time and place 
Learned walking alone in the dark 
But you're still a pretty little delicate, 
Please be careful, 
Dandelion 

Stop being so beautiful in others' eyes 
Don't make them pick you up again- 
You know what you're doing 
Dandelion 

Quit being so kind and carefree 
You let them see acts of you 
Dandelion, 
you should've flickered away 

Dandelion,  
It's okay to feel everything and nothing, 
Dandelion 
It's okay to cry and not to cry, 
Dandelion 
Hurting yourself is never an option 

You just don't know how to listen, Dandelion  
You're beautiful and free You just don't know it yet

© 2018 lostnstars


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Are you talking to yourself here? It sounds like you are giving yourself advice or counseling.
I think it's introspective. I like it.
Writing down your inner thoughts is therapeutic.
Sometimes it's hard to capture your thoughts, but I think you did a pretty good job of it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

1 Year Ago

I am! It's just so frustrating whenever I do something and afterwards, I keep asking myself why the .. read more



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Are you ok? You seem unsure of yourself.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

6 Months Ago

I was, but i'm getting better at taking care of myself now 💛
HadesRising

6 Months Ago

If you ever need to talk about anything. I am a very good listener.
I love this! Especially the last two verses. Wild, beautiful and free. That truly is the dandelion.

(If you are familiar with MBTI, Dandelion is an INFJ.)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you love it esp the last two stanzas :)

and yes, and.. read more
BlueEyedCubTN

1 Year Ago

As am I. This struck me as relevant.
Nice flow of thoughts for the dandelions. You are right. Dandelions are wild and free. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have a great sense for storytelling, lostnstars. Also, a great narration of the storyline here. Whether this is about your perspective or someone else's, you have done a great job of taking the reader on a journey throughout this entire poem. Great job as always!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

1 Year Ago

I appreciate this review a lot, thank you so much! :)
Jordan Smith

1 Year Ago

Your welcome :) I'm glad I got to enjoy this poem
This is absolutely beautiful. You have a gift


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Are you talking to yourself here? It sounds like you are giving yourself advice or counseling.
I think it's introspective. I like it.
Writing down your inner thoughts is therapeutic.
Sometimes it's hard to capture your thoughts, but I think you did a pretty good job of it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lostnstars

1 Year Ago

I am! It's just so frustrating whenever I do something and afterwards, I keep asking myself why the .. read more

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