What used to be

 

 

I lay awake at night

Thinking of memories

Of you and I

How you picked me up

And just swung me

Round and Round

 

I used to look up at you

And think

Someday thats what i want

To be exactly like you

Standing tall

Through it all

 

But

Time moves forward

Memories turn blurry

Wonders and Imagination

Leak into the cold hard

Truth

 

You lied

Made me believe in

Everything you said to a "T"

Once my super hero

Now a shadow of the past

Lost forever 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Nicholas Hallows]

It's always hard to review unfinished pieces - I know mine can change dramatically from their original form.
I like the sentiment in this piece so far and am interested to see where you take it. The fact that you 'used to look up' suggests things are different now and I am looking forward to finding out why. One thing - mommories?
Please continue...

[S.E.C.]

The truth that is captured beneath it all is what brings it out the most. The addition to the first part gives it a nice twist.

[S.E.C.]

Very Mysterious, cant wait to see the continuation

[Monners]

good start...I like it so far.