Despair

just a sad senryu.

Sorrow comes calling.

When all hope is falling fast,

Then the tears will flow.

Author's Note

Please Review! :)

Reviews

[Geo Lawrence]

I was once depressed, when I thought I could get nothing good my way...Thankful those days are gone.

I like your works...

[Patricia Williams]

Thank you so much for all the reviews! They're very appreciated. :)

[Legolas]

Very well put together haiku! It captures the feeling of despair very well. On that note, just repeating what She With Eyes Like Unsh...cant read the rest of the name said, in the title, Dispair is spelt Despair.
Anyways, lovely haiku.

[Patricia Williams]

Ok I'll fix that soon! Thanks for the review!

[Legolas]

You're welcome!

[She With Eyes Like Unsh..]

This haiku is beautiful, I love it!

[She With Eyes Like Unshed Tears]

Just read the title, it should be "Despair."