LOVE EVERLASTING

LOVE EVERLASTING

A Poem by Lola

Love is great and painful

Outstanding with the right person

Very calming when not fighting

Every time you love someone they most likely love you back

 

Every time i ove someone they love me

Very nice to know some one loves you

Every rose he get you or you give her is your memories

Right people love you for who you are

Love is like a song, when you forget your song, your partner can sing it back to you

All of the great memories will not be forgoten

Save the best memorise forever

The best part of love is the memorises you share together

In the end you both love each other

Never let the worst of it get the best of you

Get the person you love and love them

© 2009 Lola


Author's Note

Lola
please tell me my errors

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This was really good. Great job Arabella. I seriously wish I thought of it.

When it says "Every time you love someone they most likely love you back" I think you should put some commas in there. Or maby in the whole thing. Just to make it flow.

Just a suggestion. " Could use it, don't have to use it"

Great poem.

--- Nicole :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Lola
Lola

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Make your own Glitter Graphics hey, i am Arabella....Lola is my pen name. I love to stay out late.You will still see me in the day light but not alot. I really enjoy being with m.. more..

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