His memory

you were a blonde beauty

              you made me laugh 

              you made me cry

              you made me trust you

              you made me fall for you

              you never loved me 

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Reviews

[Nusquam Esse]

Quick note, which may or may not be relevant. but blonde is used for women, and blond for men; it is one of those odd words which inherited gendered forms from French. (Don't know if the 'you' is male or female). Of course no one makes us do any of these things; but it often feels impossible to resist them. Sometimes it feels like the person is doing it on purpose, intended only for us, which makes finding out that the affections are not mutual... all the more unpleasant. Simple, but thanks to the way you formatted this one, it was still an interesting read.

[Brittany]

i am straight lol it's a guy

[Nusquam Esse]

I figured as much, which is why I mentioned that blond is the word used if you are describing a man... ;)

[Brittany]

lol oh ok lollolol

[Josh Dollar]

A very sad story that happens. I like the poem a lot.

[Brittany]

this ones about my first love

[Josh Dollar]

Too bad first love can't be last love too

[Brittany]

ill never love again now it's just sex and company

[Brittany]

thts all guys want from me

[Josh Dollar]

That is guys in a nutshell.

[Brittany]

lol my ex is trying his best to get it but i won't let him lol i cnt helf it im beautiful

[Shadows Ember]

This feeling is way too relatable. Guys need to earn to be respectful.

[Brittany]

i know right?

[Shadows Ember]

this is a daily note i make to myself when i see the people i am surrounded by

[rach]

Crossed out like your trying to cross him from your memory?
There is nothing worse than a love that isn't reciprocated.
Nice work.

[Brittany]

i have lots more about love:)