dazzled night

dazzled night

A Poem by Love Demon


I walked all alone, under all the bright stars
I looked up in the sky, my eyes were hipnotize
from all the beauty the sky showed me
my heart skipped a beat, my mind was blank
I dropped my bag, I didn't pick it up
My eyes couldn't lookanywhere else
I laid down on the street,
not caring about the cars or trucks
I wanted to be in the sky,
glowing with the amazing stars,
sitting down on the moon,
seeing the planes flying by,
oh what a wish that would be,
not alone, but with the love of my life.

© 2012 Love Demon


Author's Note

Love Demon
That's what I called "first magic" ^_^
Thank you roxast for helping me on this wonderful poem :D
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Very beautiful, I love the picture and the story the poem conveys. Well done ^^

Posted 7 Years Ago


Always wanted to do that with not a care in the world just free... staring at the hope-clad stars wishing I could be anywhere, but here even up there with them. Such a lovely piece, especially when you can share it with someone, well penned indeed :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Awe, this was a sweet right. I love looking at the sky. It is so pretty especially when you are able to see the stars, but I also like looking at the moon. I loved the photo too. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Thank you Angie!!! ^_^
Angie Diane♥♥

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :3
I myself have had moments like this. The sky is a beautiful wonder indeed. This poem reminds me of myself when I began my work as a writer and I like that. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love Demon

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
hypnotize..;D
magical night it is.
lovely

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love Demon

8 Years Ago

Thank you :3
100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love Demon

8 Years Ago

^_^
hipnotize-hypnotize
This is a good poem... Very imaginative
*stop and stares*...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love Demon

8 Years Ago

Thank you :D
So beautiful and amazing, I agree with you, this is "first magic" :D
Btw, your welcome ^_^
100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love Demon

8 Years Ago

Thank you ^.^
Awesome. Nice piece. I really liked the end. Makes you feel like he/she's not just admiring stars but thinking of a lost loved one. Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love Demon

8 Years Ago

Thank you ^.^
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I always wanted to do that!!!!...I'll do it with you if you do it with me....that sounded wrong lol but oh well! I LOVE YOUR POEM! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love Demon

8 Years Ago

Thank you ^.^
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8 Years Ago

*hugs* WELCOME!
Love Demon

8 Years Ago

^_^

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Added on August 27, 2012
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Hiya, names Hexctan! :DDDDDD I'm a 16 year old girl that loves to review other writers work and write poetry and books. As you can see I am a crazy kingdom hearts fan XD I do love anime, a.. more..

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