Rape Me

Claw your nails into my chest.
Let them rip my skin, unleash your beast.
The red lines you leave are the best.
Force them all the way down to my hips.
And leave your lips to the rest.

Bite my neck with your white teeth.
Let them rip my skin, unleash your beast.
Blood flowing from the veins underneath.
Lick it off as crimson lines paints the white.
Kiss the wound and feel my body's heat.

Tie my hands tightly.
Scar my body nicely.
Make me feel the pain.
The sensation which turns me insane.

Molest me and rape my body.
But keep your hands off my mind

Reviews

[taboo.poet]

Wow. This was absolutely great. I loved the ending, as Scratch said, because it's so ironic.
Keep writing.

[SugarlessGiRL]

The ending was perfect, couldn't have ended it better. Very descriptive and you portrayed the perfect image and feeling in this poem. Nicely done.

[Scratch]

I really like the nice twist at the end because it's ironic. There's no way that, after going through such horrific treatment, that a person can be left with an unmarred mind. Very nicely written.

-Scratch

[Another Human]

I liked the little twist at the end,

"Molest me and rape my body.
But keep your hands off my mind"

This poem had nice, in-depth detail. Without being too long or drab.
Overall nice poem :]