Wanting you

Wanting you

A Poem by Jadey
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So much to feel and yet surreal

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The day passed so slow and so gloomy,

But the thought of you makes me alive and be dreamy.

So much to say and to do when you’re in front of me,

But why does my mouth keep shut just the smile and a simple “Hi”.

 

One day, I congregate my courage to tell you how you affect me

But it seems too late when I saw you with Blondy, laughing, cuddling and so lively.

How I wish I was her for you to smile for me and I wish to be someone else just for you

To be with me…

© 2012 Jadey


Author's Note

Jadey
It's someone's thoughts and feelings. I just came up with it this morning. :D

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nice poem about unrequited love. I'm sure we've all felt like this at some point in our lives. You did a wonderful job at capturing that emotion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it is wonderful in the love and passion it shows..it is great in the hope and wish...it is wonderful in the picking of words and the flow of words...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jadey
Jadey

Manila, Philippines



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