Fall to Winter

Fall to Winter

A Poem by lowriter
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My obsession with fall and my feelings of dread about winter.lol

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No leaves left on the trees. No green in the world today. The first snow fall lets us know winter is on the way.

The dreariness seems to go on and on, I can't seem to find the energy of fall it is gone.

No more bright colors, of yellows,browns and reds Just the light sprinkle of white flakes as they fall upon our heads.

Once the magic of winter is here things will look up,
But for right now I will sit here and console myself in my coffee cup.

© 2014 lowriter


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Great lines…

For visual form, I think the lines would flow better broken thusly:
No leaves left on the trees.
No green in the world today.
The first snow fall lets us know
winter is on the way.

The dreariness seems to go on and on,
I can't seem to find the energy of fall
it is gone.

No more bright colors,
of yellows, browns and reds
Just the light sprinkle of white flakes
as they fall upon our heads.

Once the magic of winter is here
things will look up,
But for right now I will sit here
and console myself in my coffee cup.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great lines…

For visual form, I think the lines would flow better broken thusly:
No leaves left on the trees.
No green in the world today.
The first snow fall lets us know
winter is on the way.

The dreariness seems to go on and on,
I can't seem to find the energy of fall
it is gone.

No more bright colors,
of yellows, browns and reds
Just the light sprinkle of white flakes
as they fall upon our heads.

Once the magic of winter is here
things will look up,
But for right now I will sit here
and console myself in my coffee cup.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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lowriter
lowriter

pocatello, ID



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For me words are my release. I am new to strict structure in my writings, but i love the way you can describe almost anything. I have been writing for a while, and friends told me to go pro.. so here .. more..

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