The Unseen Artist and the Ill-Dreaded Fate of Armani Claudius

The Unseen Artist and the Ill-Dreaded Fate of Armani Claudius

A Story by Lionel Braud
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flash fiction

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Armani Claudius tread- milled through the woods; the forty five degree incline protested his climb and gave his calf muscles an inkling of their worth. At this point he could not remember the reason for his escape, his memory blotted out by the sun like a bad hangover. Any attempt to remember retaliated with needles to the head, a pinching reminder that memory did not want to be discovered. Whether if he was being pursued by someone or something, or tracking someone or something, he did not know. The horizon, however, warranted a clue. Despite the endless recession of trees ahead, the sunlight was only able to needle through certain parts of the forestry area. Remnants of the horizon had been blotted out as if by an ink pen. His eyes chased into the darkness further and further until what remained left of any sunset, five o’ clock light had been shattered and dispersed like Christmas twinkles.

 

The darkness allured him like a magnet, yet what may have been behind him was as equally terrifying. Beside him the trees seemed to sway to and fro, silhouetted in a phony black and white outline as if they had been carelessly penciled in by an unseen artist. The turf beneath became plushy and pliable, yet resilient to any inertia his legs could bear. Armani felt confided in a pressure tank; north and south fused at both ends, either path beckoned to say that the end of the road was nigh. The sounds of crumpling paper could be heard as the forest seemed to engulf itself.

 

The unseen artist, without remorse yet a strong sense of dejection, injudiciously tossed the ill fortuned Armani into the wastebasket; unknowingly so, the unseen artist had just trashed a Nobel Prize of a work into the dumps.

© 2008 Lionel Braud


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I love this! Also I can't believe you just wrote this like twenty minutes ago. Such a true telling of the writer's journey. The painful aspect of creation and then self-doubt creeps in and what is great is lost. Reminds me of that Stephen King story about him throwing out "Carrie" and his wife retrieving it from the wastebasket. Great write here...now go submit it somewhere. Seriously. Brilliant as always.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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The unknown lost work of might and beauty!
I love things that are lost that were good.
-Thank you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is very interesting and makes such a great point to all writers, don't give up on what you believe in or you'll never know the impact you work might make.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Superb. You travel well through this kind of writing. This one I particularly enjoyed.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Un-F'ing-Believable! This piece screams, "Publish me!" I felt like the character was at the mercy of the "artist" and it certainly brings forth many things to ponder in the real world, because many times we all feel that there are other forces controlling our fate. An excellent short story in which I am wowed by :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! Also I can't believe you just wrote this like twenty minutes ago. Such a true telling of the writer's journey. The painful aspect of creation and then self-doubt creeps in and what is great is lost. Reminds me of that Stephen King story about him throwing out "Carrie" and his wife retrieving it from the wastebasket. Great write here...now go submit it somewhere. Seriously. Brilliant as always.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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