destroy by the gods

this poem was born thought my emotion and things that im faces with everyday

forgotten by gods and left to fight to stay alive

did the gods care or regret  what they have done  {no}

they took  more and more from her killing her within her wall

did she try to stay alive and ask for forgiveness {yes]

but gods decided to destroy more and more .

a vision was giving to her to see her timeless death   

did she want to die ? yes but its the fate of leaving her loves one in the back .

now she sick and scared all alone ,her eyes are be on numb .

once's again she trys to ask forgiveness from the gods .

as the continues to kill her slowly in her walls .

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Whom the gods seek to destroy, they first make mad.

[Raven moon]

what do you mean ?

[John the Baptist]

I may have misunderstood your intent in the poem. It reminded me of a line from Longfellow's poem "The Masque of Pandora": "Whom the gods would destroy, they first make mad."