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A Poem by luciddreamer
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Another one of my daughters writings

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Shadowed thoughts

Vivid dreams

Nothing is ever

quite as it seems

note after note

the music plays

beat after beat

locking fears away

solitude is peace

peace I can't find

replays of life

controlling my mind

need of love

fills my heart

the ground beneath me

falling apart

shivering wind

caresses my skin

but the coldness comes

from within

all alone

I sit and write

raplidly losing

the will to fight

should I love

should I hate

can't win or lose

the constant debate

outward I live

inward I've died

I've lost the will

to even cry

what is accomplished

don't you see

it won't change you

and can't change me

 

Bobbie McCord

1998

 

© 2010 luciddreamer


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great rhythmic pattern~thoughtful beats throughout~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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luciddreamer

Carrollton, GA



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