A Life Not Known

He had many questions,
but no one cared.
He had emotions,
but no one saw.
He needed support,
but no one bothered.
A need for flexibility,
but it was ignored.
Everything was rigid,
nothing ever changed.
He was stranded in the universe,
he belonged no where,
not even this world.
He was hidden behind a veil,
no one could see beyond,
nor could he see through.
All he could see was
the world crushing down on him.

Reviews

[Lost?]

The struggle in this poem, is something I think everyone goes through at least once in their life.
It was well written and I understand the weight the world can have sometimes.
Pressure is tough and when no one cares, sometimes it's enough to snap you in half.

[Rev. Fr, S. D. Blankens..]

WOW, my friend I really truly loved this. It reminds me of my life... Anyways Wonderfull job with this and I hope you feel better.


S.D.Blankenship the GOTHICCOWBOY