All this, for her...

All this, for her...

A Poem by Rath
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Kid, this is one's for you....

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My thoughts are wearing thin

Maybe,...Just maybe

I have to save her

For she will save me

I must lift her up

And together we will touch the sky

I'll give her the moon as a pendant

And the stars will be her glitter

 

I'm determined to succeed

I wont fail

I will try harder than anyone before me

I will succeed

 

Her family will be with her

I will be with her

The sky is our start

The end of the universe is our limit...

© 2009 Rath


Author's Note

Rath
This is an unfinished poem, I feel its missing something but i dont know what so if anyone has anything to say please say it i love to hear everything

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Love this! Full of optimism and positivity. Can't wait to read the finished product. Great piece :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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A Poem by Rath


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A Poem by Rath