I Miss...

Written by Louis Saint Verges

I miss our conversations

and the way we use to talk

I miss your hand in mine

when we use to walk

I miss looking into your eyes

as your lips touch mine

I miss holding you in my arms

and not thinking about the time

I miss the way you look at me

and the sweet words we used to tell

I miss your body's warmth

the way you feel, the way you smell

but most of all I miss

the way you stole my heart

and now that you're not here

its all fallen apart

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wow.. i was filled with nostalgia.The way you wrote i could feel him by my side holding my hand but the final reality is that - he is absent.your words paint a kaleidoscope of memories- the moments shared will always be cherished.We remember someone the most because we try to forget them the most.. The pain will never go but the treasured memories will be a soothing balm to the jaded soul.I loved it. :)
~Sophy

[Luissanto]

Thank You for your kind and beautiful words... They are truly insightful.

[Sophy Freebirds]

You're welcome muchly.

[Shannon April Alice]

longing...and you wrote it so well. it reads slowly and tenderly. lovely.

[Mikayla_Stagg]

Another beautiful and meaningful poem. You always manage to touch my heart in all of your poems and they are all so well written. Thanks for sharing (:

[Luissanto]

Thank you for such inspirational words...

[Kamari's]

I can relate very touching and bittersweet

[Luissanto]

Thank You so much for sharing...

[Renee]

lovely poem, and i could relate!

[Luissanto]

Thank You for sharing... Your words honor me.

[MsJewel]

I can feel the love and longing that lingers softly in each word. This is a love poem sighs were made for. Thank you for the read request. Your poem is lovely.

:) Julie

[Luissanto]

Thank You Julie, for sharing such inspirational words...

[Angie G]

Beautiful words for those of us that miss that special someone.. Ty..

[Luissanto]

Thank You for taking the time to read my work and sharing your thoughts with me...

[Angie G]

You're welcome.. I have honestly enjoyed all your writing. Its real, heartfelt, and each tells a story.

[Luissanto]

You honor me with your beautiful words... Thank You.

[AprilRN1210]

I have to say, I am becoming a fan.. You have touched me yet again with your words.. Not only is this romantic, touching, bittersweet, it does it in such a tender, delicate, soothing, alluring way.. You seduce me with your words to read more, keep going, dig deeper, FEEL.. The flow and construction are brilliant and add so much to this piece, your rhymes are done very well, and the emotion is breathtaking.. You have such magic with your words, it whispers to me.. It does it in such a way that I am helpless not to listen, to feel, to get carried away in its spell.. I love the moments and emotions that you choose to highlight in this heartfelt write.. They are so meaningful, honest, and real.. It makes this so much more relatable, moving, and beautiful... While this does have a sad feel to it, it also makes you see the special moments that were so wonderful, it melts the heart and makes the reader feel torn between the sweet, loving words and the pain of its absence... Yes, sir.. I am officially a fan.. I absolutely love everything about this..

*on a side note*
"and the sweet words we use to tell"---did you mean "used"?

[Luissanto]

Thank you for all your kind words and reviews. As always it is a pleasure for
me to read your incredible insights about my writing. I love the way, you pour
your heart into every review. Thank You so much, your words touch
me deeply... And yes I did mean "used"

[AprilRN1210]

With your work it is definitely my pleasure.. you're more than welcome... I put my heart in everything I do:)
I am glad my words touched you.. As yours always touch mine.. I saw you changed it.. I always love when someone can catch my oops for me.. lets me know someone is paying attention:D

[loverofpoetry7]

Oh my goodness this is so touching and tugs at the heart strings. How many times have I been here myself. You've really captured a feeling here...very nice writing.

[Luissanto]

Thank You for such kind and beautiful words...