when minds wander

when minds wander

A Poem by lunafoo

Over the summer
my mind went a flutter
of how you may have changed too.

over the course of three months
we're hardly still runts
oh, how I wish you grew!

If just a bit taller,
and not still so smaller,
I've so often thought this through.


but I guess it wont matter,
as long as you flatter,
my heart will be given to you

© 2008 lunafoo


Author's Note

lunafoo
just want to capture the longing of a childs heart over the eternity of the summer

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That was so beautiful. I loved the message and the words flowed great. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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CJ
cool i dont see alot of poems that fit so perfictly

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can remember that time of life. The time when we were growing and changing, and three months seemed an eternity to be away from that person you admired. Yes, you certainly have caught the flighty emotions and thoughts of those long summer days in this poem. I certainly brought back the memories for me! Nice work! :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very well written.
Very cute and to the point poem.
I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing.
Carla

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw, that had a sweet ring to it and the rhyming was nice. I liked the whole bit it was, don't take this the worng way, childish in a way, but that doesn't mean its bad. It just shows basic love and how much you do love this person.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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lunafoo
lunafoo

St. Louis, MO



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I'm a young author and i have had a poem published in The Anthology of Poetry by Young Adults, i take inspiration from life and every day experiences hoping to capture emotion and memories through my .. more..

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