when minds wander

when minds wander

A Poem by lunafoo

Over the summer
my mind went a flutter
of how you may have changed too.

over the course of three months
we're hardly still runts
oh, how I wish you grew!

If just a bit taller,
and not still so smaller,
I've so often thought this through.

but I guess it wont matter,
as long as you flatter,
my heart will be given to you

© 2008 lunafoo

Author's Note

just want to capture the longing of a childs heart over the eternity of the summer

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This was a lovely rhyme. I enjoyed how it invokes the feelings of summer.

Posted 7 Months Ago

That was so beautiful. I loved the message and the words flowed great. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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cool i dont see alot of poems that fit so perfictly

Posted 13 Years Ago

I can remember that time of life. The time when we were growing and changing, and three months seemed an eternity to be away from that person you admired. Yes, you certainly have caught the flighty emotions and thoughts of those long summer days in this poem. I certainly brought back the memories for me! Nice work! :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago

Very well written.
Very cute and to the point poem.
I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Aw, that had a sweet ring to it and the rhyming was nice. I liked the whole bit it was, don't take this the worng way, childish in a way, but that doesn't mean its bad. It just shows basic love and how much you do love this person.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on April 1, 2008
Last Updated on April 1, 2008



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