An Eternity of Sadness

Have you ever heard a cry,

In the holy hour of the night?

Full of sorrow, pain and despair

An essence of heartbreak.

 

A fading voice

Freezing cold as ice.

Trembling with great fear,

Asking help, flowing with tears.

 

Mistress of no prowess,

A queen of sadness;

With heart of humility,

And spirit of inferiority.

Simplicity she has

Love she lacks

Still like a rock,

Cold as ice.

 

Ignored and vain

As if she's insane.

Every second, every moment

A living lament.

 

If only the sun would shine

Upon this suppressed entity,

Embrace her with warmth and vitality

To make her life appear to be happy.

 

If only there is something

That will seep all worries and fear,

To make her life appear

Like a happy one to see

For a girl like thee..

Author's Note

please help me by reviewing.. i would really appreciate if you will..

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Sad and beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Fantasyfairy]

A sad poem, it is well written. Stanza 3 does seem a little long, as the rest of the stanzas are short, only 4 or 5 lines. It would be better to keep them like that, it ruins the flow a little. Besides that it is well written, and sounds good. XX