Our Relationship

Our Relationship

A Poem by AJ Noyce
"

Basically it describes most people that I have seen have a relationship like this where one person is always trying more then the other.

"

 Master in disguise. You stole my heart.

You ripped it apart.

You came prancing in.

Its not like it was a sin

for me to fall in love with you.

I just wnated it to be true.

I handed myself over

so fast but I wasn't sober

enough to see through your lies.

You looked me in the eyes

and told me you loved me.

Why couldn't I make you see

that we were meant to be, but we lost it.

Our whole relationship was a fit

of trying so hard to stay together

I wanted us to be forever

but for you, forever meant never again.

So maybe our relationship was a sin

but I couldn't help falling in love with you.

© 2014 AJ Noyce


Author's Note

AJ Noyce
Ignore the grammer problems, I will fix them later. What did you think of the poem? Did it make sense? Could you feel the feelings of the speaker?

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

121 Views
Added on March 18, 2014
Last Updated on March 18, 2014
Tags: relationship; love; break-ups;

Author

AJ Noyce
AJ Noyce

UT



Writing
Gone Gone

A Poem by AJ Noyce