UnPerfect

UnPerfect

A Poem by AJ Noyce
"

Society makes me feel like..

"

Why do I keep trying to be so damn perfect for this god forsaken world?

All everyone does is judge you.

They judge you for the way you part your hair,

the clothes you have,

the shoes you wear.

They judge you by the size of your hips,

the cuts on your wrists,

weather there's a gap between your thighs,

by the color of your eyes.

They judge you so harshly that this is the way you begin to see yourself.

"I'm not good enough."

Your telling yourself constantly,

Why does life have to be like this?

Why does our society have to treat us like this?

What are we doing wrong?

There's devils.  Devils buried inside our souls.

Some escaping and letting out hell that makes our world, unperfect.

That makes us feel like were not good enough.

Like were not perfect.

© 2014 AJ Noyce


Author's Note

AJ Noyce
ignore the grammar problems but do you also think this is how society is?

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Society can be very harsh and critical sometimes, but it can also be a caring idea.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sadly yes, this does sum up our society perfectly and i don't think anything will ever change that, i like your writing it tells truth: something people don't really know how to do anymore, well done for doing what others can no longer.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 23, 2014
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Tags: society; unperfect; writing