Mystic Stars

Mystic Stars

Mystic stars in the night

Fill two hearts with love

Holding each other tight

As they gaze above

Reviews

[Ethan Paz]

Romantic here. Every lovers dream is this poem even though they deny it. I like how you do short poems with a good meaning or ending. I like these two lines:

"Mystic stars in the night
Fill two hearts with love."

That is one-half of the romance side but you complete the cake with the frosting:

"Holding each other tight
As they gaze above."

Good job in building up the suspense. Good job with the rhyme scheme also: ABAB. All in all, a very good poem.

[A]

Awww...this brought a smile to my face! I love this short, yet sweet writing! Great poem! :)