A New Dance

I inhale and exhale, 

Each surge of air
Refreshing and seductive.
My eyes are closed, how I like it.
Where am I? Only others can really tell, 
But don't spoil it, please. 

I am in a forest, in the arms of the night.
I sit on cool dirt, its earthy musk mesmerizing,
Filling my nostrils with its spell.
Around me, strong oak trees stand. 
Their treetops decorate the night sky with intertwining branches,
Crisp leaves fall delicately to wrap my shoulders and back. 
The million stars laugh and wink, transfixing me more with their
Swift dances.

I rise from my pose, and climb up the smooth branches
Of a nearby tree, invited.
With each foot I ascend, I become more weightless. 
Now, almost floating, I am among the last.
I peer up into the vast universe, lost in its eyes. 
I fly up past the branches, and am embraced 
By the silky night air. The wind flutters around me, 
Plays with my hair and eyelashes. 
The stars teach me their dance. 

This infatuation won't last forever, though, 
For I must now open my eyes.  

Reviews

[Twisted Words (Tom)]

You have very interesting word choice, and descriptions. I feel this as enjoying something like a seduction which can't last.

[David Scott]

I like how you write a dream as reality. I believe if we can dream it, we can live it...
Loved this inspirational poetry!

[redzone]

surprised no one has commented on this dreamy poem Madeline.... there is both beauty and romance here, not to mention the beauty of romantic dance... stars are great dancer aren't they??!!!
~~redzone

[Madeline]

Thank you very much! Glad that you enjoyed this piece.