I still remember

I wrote this free verse in the middle of the night. It talks about the stuff that followed after i lost my father in 2004

It was 11 years ago when you left us 

I still remember the day too.

You lied there, lifeless as mom tried to bring you back to life

I still remember when we went to your funeral 

Mom was holding us tight as people said their condolences I still remember moving

Florida to North Carolina to Puerto Rico then New York

Where mom found us a homeless shelter to live in

I still remember mom tearing up every time she saw us 

I still remember Father's day and coming home to ask what a dad is 

Because it was something my brothers and I never had. 

I still remember visiting our aunt, your sister 

And her crying because we look just like you. 

Mom being hated by your family because they blamed her

For your constant drinking and abuse.

I still remember mom crying every December 11th,

The day we lost you

A week after my 4th birthday.

I still remember feeling anger 

Towards people who said they hated their dad 

Because i still remember going to bed every night 

Wishing you were still here

Author's Note

I really want advice on how to improve. Whether its telling me to trash it all or add/ remove more punctuation and things like that. I want to hear what you guys have to say so i can improve further works