At the end of Rainbow

A run on story.

A life so young. So sweet. Full of love. I see you. I love you. Where this love comes from. I do not know. Where are you my love? I need to see you my sweet. Someday I want to know you. How do you look dearest. Your beautiful you know. I think about you and it makes me crazy. Crazily in love with you sweet. With your dreading locks your gleaming smile. Everything about you is how it should be. The way I want to be. Someday we will be together. On a bed full of roses and a world full of life. Where the sun is a blazing fire. And rain drops onto our tongues and melts into the distance. Someday sweetness I will get the nerve to ask you. To marry me. To live with me. At the end of the rainbow where all things begin!!

Reviews

[Tim]

A few grammer errors aside, It has a very optimistic view to it. Some may see it as pie in the sky daydreaming, but you give the character in the story a personality of hopes and dreams. A perfect love? Well maybe, maybe not, but it does have an uplifting mood of one who is no doubt young and eager for that special someone.
Nice.