Forest of Darkness

   Stumbling through forests of insanity, pursued by henchmen commanded by evil.

     Falling on outcroppings of rocky bitterness, thrust deeper by knives of sorrow.

    Shot through the soul by arrows of desperation that are poisioned with self pity,

   fueled by anger and loss, driven by fear determining the final outcome by wisely

   chosen weapons of strength and determination, outwitting the invisible source

                 obtaining freedom throught the power of true courage.....

   

   

Reviews

[Amanda]

a good write...the symbolism is really good.

my only complaint is that it lacks form...i had to read it twice to get the true meaning of the words. don't get me wrong, the writing was very good, it just need some structure to get the flow right.

Always,

Amanda