An aspiring dusk

On the eve of a cloudy friday
I lied down on the swing
aspiring all the nature around me
winding away like a being

The hollihocks around me dancing gaily
The trees around me waving swaily.

It looked as if they wanted to say something,
maybe expressing their happiness of their existences.
A sweet breeze then comes slowly,
drowning away all my sorrows , and leaving me happily

The birds are happy ,
The sky is dusty..
as if god was arriving here shortly....

And then it becomes a little dark
as if it wanted to last only at that part.

I dont need to be anyone to talk to the nature around me
neither they need to be louder
to communicate with me.

Its all the power of love ,
even without any introduction
that we are binded up with a strong force with the nature...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The peace of nature keep us calm and in tune with the beauty of life. I like the description and the story in your poem. A excellent poem. Nature is a gift we need to take care of.
Coyote