SHE'S IN LOVE, HE'S NOT

the poem talks about one sided love and when it finally blooms in the other person's heart...it was too late

She look at him with a twinkle in her eyes

He looks at her with coldness, and feed her with lies

She is building dreams and bright future with him

He gave her lame excuses and a fake dream

She tried to be the sweetest person in his life

He made her believe that he wants her to be his wife

She did everything to make him happy

He returned the favor by being snappy

She's not dumb,numb or too blind

He saw her tears and pain but does not mind

She felt the emptiness and one sided track

He's afraid to let her go, might not win her back

She extends all the patience with all her might

He abused that patience and think that he is bright

But one day she gave up without wanting to

Too late he realized he love her too

Late enough to show her his sweetness

And now he felt was pure emptiness and sadness

He wish he was not that selfish enough

Now living a life without her is tough

And now the lady who truly love him fades away

No matter how he tried to convince her to stay

For love ignored like a plant won't grow

It will simply die and loose its glow

Author's Note

I'm an amateur here please no nasty comments hahaha thanks

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

For love ignored like a plant won't grow
It will simply die and loose its glow.....

Beautiful lines with a lot more hidden behind those words.

[Edmerlyn Geralde]

yeah cause its true it's like a fire burning blown by the wind it'll loose its flame and soon be lifeless coal...

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I like how, instead of ending it with a happy or sad ending for her, the one I felt sorry for, you ended it with the not so happy ending for him. Nice write. Keep up the good work.

- Cyprian.

[Edmerlyn Geralde]

thanks a lot =)

[Lydia Shutter]

Too much, too little, too late! He realizes what he has lost after she moves on. So sad and a tale that plays out all too often. Indeed, when love is ignored, it withers and dies. Very nicely written. Lydi**

[Edmerlyn Geralde]

thank you =) God bless