Dark Rain Box

- An Alternative Rock Song Lyrics inspired from my Poem "Box Rain Dark"

Dark Rain Box  

Marc Marlon Villaflor

Dark Alternative Rock Song

I

Shut the door, smashing sound in the hallway

That night we have to say goodbye

Turning down your wish of staying for another day

I am tired of living in this endless lies

All we’ve got is heartaches when we cry

II

Stepping down the stairs it breaks my heart

Remembering those days when we were together

Remembering those kisses that promised a new day

Each moment’s last, pictures perfect

Do you hear me? Hear my voice, before I say

Chorus

A dark goodbye to you my love, a darkest hour with you my love

The rain of fire, the rain of fire, I am completely out of your sight

Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

Dark Rain Box, Dark rain Box, those memories shape our fate tonight

Bridge

 

Storms, big waves and earthquakes

I’m wondering if we could build a life together

 

Space, empty room and box

Now my life has no direction

 

Clouds rain and tears

Now I have lost you

 

Dark Rain Box Goodbye my love

 

Chorus

  

A dark goodbye to you my love, a darkest hour with you my love

 The rain of fire, the rain of fire, I am completely out of your sight

 Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

 Dark Rain Box, Dark rain Box, those memories shape our fate tonight

 

 

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I love the title and the lyrics fit perfectly, you've done a great job here Marc. So true, some people, no matter how much they love one another just aren't good for each other, I think your words will resonate with a lot of people, I know they do for me. Excellent my friend!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Frie, love your words :) thanks a lot.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Marc, good to see you back here, always my friend :-)

[Vani Jalagar]

lyrics is very beautiful......sad yet rocking :)
many people fall in love with each other, only few will survive in it.....Thank you for sharing Marc:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Vani :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Sometimes, it just isn't right, no matter how much love there is. Great lyrics, they flow perfectly. Marc.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Ms. Rita :) glad you like it!

[francis]

Love can be so hurt if you guys don't match

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Francis :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the song. The movement of words was amazing.
"Storms, big waves and earthquakes
I’m wondering if we could build a life together"
Sometime we ride the waves knowing can be a dark ending. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thank you Sir :)

[Wildflower]

So sad and heartfelt.
Enjoyed this.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Wildflower :)

[Sami Khalil]

"A dark goodbye to you my love, a darkest hour with you my love

The rain of fire, the rain of fire, I am completely out of your sight

Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

Dark Rain Box, Dark rain Box, those memories shape our fate tonight"

I don't know about songs but this sounds so poetic...Thank you for sharing...:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Subtle and prosaic, I enjoyed!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

THanks SHEEMA :)

[Ohhhwillow]

Your title is enchanting, certainly drawing attention into this romantic melody. I like that you put this in a familiar setting, welding a believable and relatable picture for the reader. Be careful with you grammar, as I noticed a few slight errors in there such as "tired of living this endless lies" and "remembering those days when we are together". (mixed tenses here) Other than this, I would say avoid clichés, however perhaps that is just me. Anyway, this piece drew on some familiar feelings, keep up the good work Marc :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Willow great review love it!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Gosh! Ito na naman. I almost cry kaya doon sa Box Rain Dark mo. Lalo na siguro ito pag narinig ko ang notes. I'm excited, bro. Simulan na yang pagpa-arrange, please. Galing-galing naman.

I like the lyrics. Talagang andoon pa rin yung fave poem ko. Di ba true-to-life story mo to? Sorry, pero alam ko, nabanggit mo dati yun eh.

Lyrics pa lang, excellent na. Notes please...

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

After a week I will post the song version, but it is not me will sing it, hehehe, there is an indie alternative rock singer. Thanks Dhaye for the kind review.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome, bro. :)