RECAP

RECAP

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor


RECAP-Marc Marc Marlon Villaflor
3rd Single for ECHO PROJECT

Burnin blood filled the empty space 
shadow of failed dreams keep hunting the plac
Where I am now is just traces of memory
Where I am going still a puzzled destiny

I keep holding my breath
Rushing to the timeline I've set
Now as I am moving closer 
I can see things clearer

(Part Lyrics of the Alternative/Rock Song I composed for my international band The Echo Project )

© 2015 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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it would be wonderful to hear this in its completed form. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I was going to say exactly what your other reviewer, Gabrielle here, has said. Those 2 lines are very well done :) Nice piece, all in all!

Posted 6 Years Ago


"Where i am now is just traces of memory
Where i am going still a puzzled destiny"-- i loved those lines.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..

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