not me

not me

A Poem by marie

don't you see i'm hurting now
don't you hear i'm crying out 
my soul is broken 
my heart is shattered 

will you not comfort me
will you not sate the longing within me
who am i
who is this person i've become 

i do not know this person in the mirror
her eyes are dead 
her soul masked in suffering 
surely this cannot be me

© 2012 marie

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your poetry has the ability to make the reader feel the pain. I really enjoyed this. It also makes me feel dead.

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

thank you i try to write with my mood this poem i wrote through a really tough patch that had a stro.. read more

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Added on July 14, 2012
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