The Lost and Not Found

Copping with our lost

My greatest lost was that of a loved one.
My world.
My mom's world.
Flashbacks.
I get those all the time.
I'm not the same.
I'm not the same.
How can I be? I'm lost, why can't you see?
I can't find the girl
I used to be.
Can you?
I'm lost
And to be found
Now seems impossible.

Reviews

[John Thomas]

Losing people is something we all go through, sooner or later. I'm sorry for your loss.

[Robert Gluzman]

Yet short, you are still able to convey sadness.
only thing ---- It sounds more formal and serious when you say 'My mother's world' instead of 'moms'
It be nice if you could complete this, you are good. All you got to do is share your feelings, be honest as much as possible.

I am very sorry for your loss dear :(

[thoughtsofforgotten]

This poem tells a long story in a very few lines. Great work, I hope to read more from you. Welcome here, I'm also kinda new, so I know how you feel:) Have a nice day

[ksscampos]

It is not impossible.. keep going, its show she would've wanted to see you, strong!